IXL | Create varied sentences based on models

Read the model sentence from Lindsey Leavitt's Going Vintage.

I walk around the desk, still amazed at the out-of-body feeling, like everything's all floating or slow motion.

Use the words and phrases to create a new sentence that matches the model.

completely focused

Katie coded through the night,

until her fingers grew sore and heavy

on her computer screen,

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Read the model sentence from Lindsey Leavitt's Going Vintage.

I walk around the desk, still amazed at the out-of-body feeling, like everything's all floating or slow motion.

Use the words and phrases to create a new sentence that matches the model.

on her computer screen,

Mia coded through the night,

until her fingers grew sore and heavy

completely focused

key idea

To make your writing more interesting, try to use a mix of different kinds of sentences. You can get ideas for new kinds of sentences by imitating sentences that you read.

To imitate a model sentence, first look at its form, or pattern. Ask what sorts of words, phrases, and clauses the sentence uses and what order they are in. Then, create a new sentence following the same pattern.

Model sentence:

When I stepped out into the bright sunlight from the darkness of the movie house, I had only two things on my mind: Paul Newman and a ride home.

New sentence:

As long as our secret hideout stayed hidden from other people in the deep, deserted forest, we would have our lifelong dream: no parents and plenty of beef jerky.

Both sentences use a subordinating conjunction (when and as long as) to introduce the first clause.

Both sentences use prepositional phrases (into the bright sunlight; from the darkness of the movie house; from other people; and in the deep, deserted forest) to modify parts of the first clause.

Both sentences use a colon (:) to introduce final noun phrases (Paul Newman and a ride home and no parents and plenty of beef jerky).

solution

Look closely at the parts of the model sentence.

I walk around the desk, still amazed at the out-of-body feeling, like everything's all floating or slow motion.

See how they match the parts of the new sentence.

Mia coded through the night, completely focused on her computer screen, until her fingers grew sore and heavy.

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